Monday 16 September 2013

And then I saw a bight light

One day there was a zombie at my door step.He said" I want to eat your brains".so I shut the door and ran out the back door.I went to my nanas house and I said to nana"that a zombie is comin to eat my brains and she said"that do you really think that a old fat zombie is coming to eat your brains you are crazy".Then the old fat zombie ate my nana and I said to the old fat zombie "you will never catch me."


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4 comments:

  1. Wow Zoe nice story poor nana, I loved it keep up the good work

    Lilly

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  2. Nice work Zoe I loved it you did a nice job keep up the good work.

    Lilly

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  3. Hi Zoe,

    What an unusual day this would have been! I don't know what I would do if a zombie came to my door, but I certainly wouldn't want to let him in.

    Try to remember when you have a new speaker, you need a new line.

    Well done and keep writing.

    Mr Connor
    Team 100wc

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  4. Hi Zoe, Thanks for your100wc story. What a brave Nana to protect you like that!! Just a reminder that you need to use the 100wc prompt in your writing.

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